Very angsty story of Heyes survival of the bank predicament, coming out of prison, and coping with the death. Kid Curry had lots of patience to see his partner through it. Loved it!
Penski: February 2021
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UNBROKEN
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Such a good story of angst and heroic friendship. Enjoyed reading it immensely.
Kattayl: February 2021
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I really enjoyed this story. A more in depth look into the inner-workings of the minds of the characters than was displayed in the show, but entirely believable and really shows the depth of the friendship/bond between them. Heyes always did come across as resistant to violence – tough on the outside but with a gentle heart. I could believe him feeling and reacting how he did in this story. Hope to read more!
Leah: February 2021
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Your latest, "Unbroken," has quickly become one of my favorites. Very angsty, but with hope and promise throughout, and proof of what a caring partnership can achieve. Nicely done!
goldieasj: February 2021
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I'm never sure which hurts more, Heyes in prison or Kid in prison. Glad the Kid was there for Heyes.
Linda: Feburary 2021
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This was hard to read. But hurt, angst and comfort stories are also good stories. It is a good thing that they are both stubborn and can out wait the other one when they are hurting or are in trouble. It was a horrible prison system that wouldn't even let you talk to anyone without an equally horrible punishment. Well done.
ingin6: February 2021
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Great title for this story. It's understandable we try and hide our pain, our fears from people we care for. Heyes telling the Kid he'll be fine in prison is right on point. After being in prison and isolated from anyone and any kind of stimulating activity I can well understand Heyes withdrawing into himself. A form of self preservation takes over. This type of thing takes time and help from a close friend to overcome and some normalcy return. Curry was up to the job and I was impressed how he handled Heyes' shock after he'd killed a man. You presented a deeper insight into both Heyes and Curry in this touching story. Well done.
Pamela Corsa: June 2021
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Very angsty and a tough emotional story to read (and probably write) with a very apt title. I thank you for the in depth exploration into the emotional repercussions and toll their lives take on both partners even if the circumstances differ. Heyes is indeed a strong person to make it through prison, especially under the twisted circumstances, with enough of himself intact that Curry can work to draw out and nurture back to health, psychologically and physically. The unbreakable bond between Heyes and Curry and their understanding of the core selves of each other will see them through, no matter what life throws at them.
Nell McKeon: September 2021
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Can you break the will of a person? The answer is, yes, you can - Heyes and Curry are human after all. Strong-minded and different in their behavior but not unbreakable. I like that Heyes, being on his own, first tries to test the limits in prison and experiencing the cruel repercussions is clever enough to obviously succumb. But he was broken, to an alarming extent. I like Kid in your story. You describe him as an empathetic person who knows his friend so throughly, he instinctively did the correct things to the point when he realizes 'enough is enough'. His outburst was great, I could imagine the scene, with a stubborn Heyes, who hid behind a wall of reservation and inner solitariness, with a screen of indifference, letting Kid care about day-to-day tasks. I very much like the idea that he has to be forced to leave this reverie behind him. For me, the moral of 'Unbroken' is, that with the help of a friend, you are able to arise again out of the darkness.
Dan Ker: January 2022 [abridged]
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